The Moon

Sometimes I post a poem that needs revision. Actually, I’m never comfortable that a poem is finished. I seem to revisit them often. After some rewriting, I think the moonlight shines brighter through these words than in my previous version. (Originally posted on April 1, 2016) Don’t you think? I appreciate all feedback. 


Toni Umbarger | Thoughtseeds | The Moon | #Poetry #Moon #Night |