thoughtseeds

The Moon

Sometimes I post a poem that needs revision. Actually, I’m never comfortable that a poem is finished. I seem to revisit them often. After some rewriting, I think the moonlight shines brighter through these words than in my previous version. (Originally posted on April 1, 2016) Don’t you think? I appreciate all feedback. 

 

Toni Umbarger | Thoughtseeds | The Moon | #Poetry #Moon #Night | https://toniumbarger.wordpress.com/

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